Pat tells me that my first novel initial installment was not as wonderful as I thought.
In her words, “it sounds like one of your ” I had the most marvelous dream last night do you want to hear it??? “”
I have never understood why normal people are not fascinated by my dreams. My dreams are great adventures (well except for the ones that involve not finding my car in a huge parking lot)
I really thought the detail of the Dave Stieb jersey took the book into the realm of fine literature.
So now I am back to writing blogs about my life.
I just finished a Martin Cruz Smith book, which believe me, was much less exciting than the book I was laying out, but he used big words that challenged the readers to stop and either look it up or consider that they were reading an intellectual novel. I think that was my mistake, not enough big words.
Anyway back to my life. For some reason I have not been riding my bicycle in the last couple of years. This used to be a big part of my routine, particularly in Oakville where I would go off on 3 hour rides.
The big problem here is that we live at the top of a hill. No matter where I ride the first half hour is free cycling down hill (when I am full of energy) and the last hour is up-hill with my heart pounding and wondering if I should have brought my cell phone so I could call the wife as I died from a heart attack. It would be a shame to die without being able to express my deep felt love for her, or gasping for help.
So the last couple of days I have gone through this aerobic experience and, while I lived through the heart attack period, the biggest problem is that my bum is not used to long bike rides.
I rode off to the clubhouse this morning to pick up the paper, a short ride, and could barely sit on the saddle. Who knew that you could have calluses on your bum cheeks?
Now is this more interesting than my novel? Apparently I was going to discover that the woman that took my Jersey was a foreign spy….
2 responses to “OK New story”
Patty
August 2nd, 2014 at 19:49
I vote that you find a totally new subject … not the book, not the bicycle rides.
Sandra
August 2nd, 2014 at 20:25
How about an electric bike? it’s all the rage in Japan!?